Friday, June 26, 2015

My Kennings Poem



Original (1920 × 1080)

Lego Player
Minecraft Lover
Chocolate Adorer
Kinaesthetic Learner


Original (915 × 1200)Ball Kicker
Maths Hater
Pencil User
Work Doer


Rad Drawer
Book Reader
Comic Liker          
Email Reciever


Money Wanter
Star Getter
Ipad Needer
Sound Maker


by Romeo


Friday, June 12, 2015

Star of the week



I got this certificate for showing one of the values of the week witch was using Extended abstract with my learning.

SALT Spelling Strategy


I am learning to use the SALT strategy in our books.
I am so proud of being able to do this task independently.
It can be tricky to remember how to do this strategy.
I can be helped by a buddy to do this task.
The next step for me in my learning is to do this with harder words.

Spelling Graph


In weeks 2,5,7,10 and 6 i didn't practice enough and on the other weeks I practiced just enough.
In spelling  am working on getting all of my spelling tests 10%. But I haven't done that yet.
I am so proud of being able to get 10% on some of the weeks.
It can be tricky to do practice my words.
My mum can help me by helping me practic my words.
The next step for me might be to do another 10 spelling tests but with harder words.

ANZAC Recount

End Of The LineImage result for world war one landing boats


It’s 3.00 am on the 25th April 1915.  The landing boats have almost  arrived at  “Z “beach.  I have the feeling I’m going to die.I have adrenaline pumping through my blood.


I’m crammed  into a landing boat with 40 other soldiers. Everyone was dead silent as we got  closer to the landing site. I looked around at my friends and  they all looked  terrified.  I stopped looking around and closed my eyes.   All  I could hear was the sound of the calm waves swishing against the boats.  


The moon dipped behind the clouds and everything went dark.  Then all I saw was a bright spark of light above me.  Suddenly a beacon of light was lit on land in front of me.  “ We have been exposed “ shouted the General.  “Take cover”.  BANG! BANG !went the guns on land.  BANG! BANG!


Most of my friends had died already.  Immediately killed by the rain of bullets that were pouring over us.  Soldiers were crying. The  bullets were spraying over all of the landing boats.  We were all taking massive hits from them.


All I could see was orange lights as if I was at an amusement park but this was a deadly one.  But this amusement park was not going to have a happy ending. I thought to myself is this the end of the line?

By Romeo

Reflection
In writing I am learning to write a recount.
I am so proud of being able to write a recount all by myself.
It can be tricky to write a recount and write using the right punctuation and no spelling mistakes.
My buddy can help me can help me by checking my work after I have finished.
The next step for me might be to write this again with a different subject.

End Of The Line

Friday, June 5, 2015




I am learning to use information and clues in a text to visualise what it is like to live in a War Zone.
I am so proud of how I set it out.
The next step for me in reading is to try this again but with a different task.
It can be tricky to make things with the shapes.

Maths Mansion Evidence - What is the Question ?

What itheQuestion?

I am learning to recognise the effect of multiplying and dividing a number by 10, 100 and 1,000.
I am so proud of being able to find all the answers to the question
It can be tricky to multiply decimals.
My buddy could help me if I get stuck.
The next step for me in my learning would be to do this task but with a bigger number.